Sample/Test threads
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Option 1: Action:
[It's a quiet night. One that lets them sit around the fire and just relax for a moment, not hearing anything in the distance. Well, relax as much as they ever can. Michonne sits with her sword over her lap, watching the flames jump and flicker before she turns, saying,] When I was young, we never went camping. My parents were busy, sure, working a lot, but ... it ... it didn't seem fun. All the dirt, all the bugs? [She has to laugh a little. It's funny, isn't it? Almost Karma.] Gotta love the dirt and the bugs. [Of course, that's when something rustles in the woods just beyond the light of the fire.]
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Option 2: Prose:
The road stretches out in front of them almost like a mirage. Michonne puts one foot in front of the other, over and over again. Each time, the end doesn't get any closer. Of course, the end won't get any closer. That's what wakes Michonne up in the middle of the night. "I used to think mirages were only in the desert. That's what they always showed in the movies ... the desert spreading out all wavy?" But the trees and the road seem to be doing the same thing. She takes a drink from her water bottle, draining it dry.
She rattles it. They're going to need more water soon and sky is bright, the air arid. Back in the day, she would have three or four bottles of lotion in the bathroom, different scents for different days. That doesn't just seem like a different life, after all. It was a different life. Now, she barely thinks about lotion at all, except at random times. Movies and lotion. She chuckles just a little, at herself.
[It's a quiet night. One that lets them sit around the fire and just relax for a moment, not hearing anything in the distance. Well, relax as much as they ever can. Michonne sits with her sword over her lap, watching the flames jump and flicker before she turns, saying,] When I was young, we never went camping. My parents were busy, sure, working a lot, but ... it ... it didn't seem fun. All the dirt, all the bugs? [She has to laugh a little. It's funny, isn't it? Almost Karma.] Gotta love the dirt and the bugs. [Of course, that's when something rustles in the woods just beyond the light of the fire.]
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Option 2: Prose:
The road stretches out in front of them almost like a mirage. Michonne puts one foot in front of the other, over and over again. Each time, the end doesn't get any closer. Of course, the end won't get any closer. That's what wakes Michonne up in the middle of the night. "I used to think mirages were only in the desert. That's what they always showed in the movies ... the desert spreading out all wavy?" But the trees and the road seem to be doing the same thing. She takes a drink from her water bottle, draining it dry.
She rattles it. They're going to need more water soon and sky is bright, the air arid. Back in the day, she would have three or four bottles of lotion in the bathroom, different scents for different days. That doesn't just seem like a different life, after all. It was a different life. Now, she barely thinks about lotion at all, except at random times. Movies and lotion. She chuckles just a little, at herself.
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Date: 2015-03-04 05:01 am (UTC)"Here, you can have some of mine. You need it."
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Date: 2015-03-04 01:16 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-03-04 04:01 pm (UTC)He heard that.
Rick slowly stands, his hand on the sharp dagger in its sheath as he looks toward the forest in the direction the sound came from. He points to Michonne and points in one direction while he moves off in another so they're on either side of where the sound came from. ]
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Date: 2015-03-04 07:41 pm (UTC)There it is. The Walker was once a woman, but is now hardly rotting skin over bones. She seems to sense Michonne first, heading toward her with a shambling walk. Michonne stays still. Waiting. It needs to be closer before she strikes.]
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Date: 2015-03-05 02:41 am (UTC)Just as he turns back toward camp he catches sight of another Walker, this one young, once a teenager, a boy. It ambles toward him and Rick takes the large machete from his holster. But then out of the shadows there's another one.
And another one.
Rick curses under his breath and slams the machete down into the skull of one. He looks over to Michonne. ] There's more. [ He hisses the words as two more come upon him and he uses one walker to push the other one back into the trunk of a tree. The machete slices through the skull of one while he draws his dagger from its holster with his other hand. He brings that dagger up through the jaw of the second walker and then steps back to see how many more there are.
They might have to run. ]
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Date: 2015-03-05 02:45 am (UTC)Then she counters and they have the two cornered.] I'll take this one. [She kicks it, sending it staggering so she can slice down its back.]
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Date: 2015-03-05 04:36 am (UTC)"You're welcome. And well, this is kinda like the desert, isn't it? We haven't had enough food or water in... No, not gonna go there. We need to keep hoping we'll find a good place to stop soon." And she doesn't mean stop and camp for the night. She hopes they will find another place like the prison, where they can stay safe, at least for more than a few hours.
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Date: 2015-03-06 05:42 am (UTC)That's why when Michonne asks if she's ok, she's just about to pretend and say yes. But instead, she shakes her head. "No..."
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Date: 2015-03-07 07:28 pm (UTC)Rick nods when she says she's going after another one and looks back through the trees. There were a dozen or so more stragglers in this mini herd. If they could dispatch them all without firing a shot, that would be ideal. ]
'Bout a dozen more. [ He pushes at another one, sending it back into another walker. Both of them topple to the ground. Rick leans down to jam his knife in one, the two skulls. ]
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Date: 2015-03-07 08:04 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-03-08 12:50 am (UTC)"Beth... And my Dad." Maggie knows she doesn't have to say much more, Michonne understands. She lost people too, like everyone in their group.
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Date: 2015-03-11 12:30 am (UTC)He stands there. Waiting. Listening to the sound of their breathing and nothing else. ] Think that's it. You alright?
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Date: 2015-03-11 05:32 am (UTC)Just as Michonne says the word rain, she feels a raindrop on her forehead. She looks up at the sky and sees how drops are starting to fall. "It seems. We need to find shelter!"
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Date: 2015-03-12 04:02 am (UTC)Oooops.
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